Sunday, 17 June 2012

pre-production

1 The items I am doing are class dance and the Grand Finale
2 I feel quite scared before the production in a good way
3 the most challenging aspects have been trying to keep in time
4 I am looking forward to getting it over with
5 my goals are keeping in time and not failing
6 my mum and dad and both Nana`s and grandad`s are coming to watch me star in our production

5 comments:

  1. Capatil letters!!!!
    But good thinking through

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  2. I loved the fact that there was a hint of voice in your writing...CAPITAL LETTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A bit longer next time. Josh

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  3. Great Joel! That`s really good writing.
    Use your capital letters!!!
    Maddi

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  4. great joel looks like lots of people are coming for you next use your capital letters

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  5. Nice work Joel. But next time use CAPITAL LETTERS ! But other than that great job.:)

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