Monday, 30 April 2012

P.I Matrix

  • Shows weeks of work
  • Audience is very interested
  • I've done the work myself
  • Research in my words – with my personality in it
  • Contains humour(?)
  • Interaction with the audience
  • Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
  • PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or videos and plays automatically

  • Shows three or four weeks of work
  • Research is mostly in my own words
  • Information is interesting and in my own words
  • Adults have supported me without doing work for me
  • Some humour (?)
  • Some interaction with the audience
  • Audience is attentive and interested
  • Speech is clear
  • PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or video
  • Shows about a week’s work
  • A little research – some in my own words
  • Adults have done some of the work for me
  • No interaction with the audience
  • No humour
  • Poor presentation
  • Few pictures
  • Mostly reads the info from the PowerPoint / presentation

  • Reads the words on the presentation
  • Clearly started at the last minute
  • Hardly any info
  • Parents have done a lot of it for me
  • No pictures or steps
  • Research is straight off the internet
  • No humour
  • Not finished on time
  • Untidy presentation
  • Speech is not very clear

Anzac work

       ANSAC (Apprentice)

age rank where from

20/5 privates/101 otago/5
corporale/6 England/1
21/10 serjeant/6 auckland/64
22/6 magor/1 christchurch/31
23/5 luietenant/6 hamilton/13
24/3 lance corporale/2 wellington/1
25/4 second luietenant/1
26/1 serjeant magor/1

why were there so meny people from auckland                    wize statment
                                                                                      why do they have so meny soljer   

Tuesday, 3 April 2012

My maths rich task 2012

My camp sample.

My maths sample

                                                             What i did well: I think i used good colours and the pictures look cool.
                                                                What i could do better: rule more acurate and not speed.
                                                        What i learnt: it is very hard to rule acurate and make the lines look good.

My writing sample

                                                      What I think i did well: I think I did well putting my writing in present tense.
                                                      What I could improve on: making my story longer.
                                                       What I learnt: It takes more than one draft to do a good story.

My writing sample 2012